Thursday, April 25, 2013

The View from Where I Sit


Faulkner said writers need three things – experience, observation and imagination. Focused observation tends to improve my writing, but that’s not why I do it. I enjoy jotting down my surroundings and the inner workings of the soul, observing them through the lens of truth, because I am fascinated by the world in which I live. I am fascinated by why people do what they do. Above all, I am fascinated by God working among us, drawing us to Himself. So here are a few of my observations. Sometimes I call it poetry.


View from Where I Sit
(Blackberry Market – Glen Ellyn, Illinois a few days after the Boston Marathon Bombing)

She twirls, a flurry of pink
Ballet tutu, fuchsia bow askew, blush velvet slippers
Twisting her blonde hair as she selects a blackberry tart
Then goes for a vanilla crème
Slowly with her walker, a silvery dame surveys the menu
An Asian waitress, hair in a sleek, perk upsweep
Red shoes, crisp apron serves up a croissant
An untimely April snow falls outside the warmth of Blackberry Market

Inside individuals savor sunny delights of choice
Of imaginative flow spiked by lattes and
The smooth banjo-strummed lyrics of Mumford & Sons
Orange pea coat, beige quilted jacket, floriated tapestry bag
A rose, tattooed like a necklace
Gracing the neck, bisque laurel wreath tiles
On the ceiling, industrial metal stools for creatives
With their laptops, me, among them
And the smell, oh, the smell
Of freshly baked cinnamon rolls
But most of all, it’s the way everyone carries themselves

They walk free
They talk free
God, maintain our peace


The Point

Cold breeze jostled me from hibernation
Three blocks from the miniature theatre
Where Peter Pan and his posse of lost boys
Snuck in around the back entrance
Turns out he starred in the play

I dropped you off, caught a cadence to the café
Passing daffodils in dying hours
Before early blooming frost
Is this butter-bright intensity diminished
If never played before an audience, like me?
Daffodils neither strut nor fret
Nature is extravagant, yet not an idiot, like we

I dine among artists and writers
Dreaming of that moment of fame
Your stage or mine? Narcissus-fueled
Fantasies orbit round name
Leading to lonely days or a bitter phrase

Yet we can enjoy all this, and be free
There’s something about wisdom that deepens
The hue of yellow and the blue in your eyes
The joy of being, spellbound by another
A stage? No, this fleeting life signifies
A humble dance before its Creator

Shakespeare was only partially right

No wonder we strut and fret
No wonder we strive to be free
We’ve missed the point


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